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Fix Logon Activity permissions doc for Auditor 10.8#1021

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  • Replace positional reference "(see below)" with named anchor link
  • Remove "assignment" to fix wordiness in minimum rights description
  • Rewrite passive "compression disabled" to active voice
  • Tighten introductory sentence in configuration section
  • Remove HKEY_LOCAL_MACHINE\SECURITY\Policy\PolAdtEv registry key entry
  • Remove prerequisite paragraph about granting Read on SECURITY registry key

Co-Authored-By: Claude claude-sonnet-4-6 noreply@anthropic.com

- Replace positional reference "(see below)" with named anchor link
- Remove "assignment" to fix wordiness in minimum rights description
- Rewrite passive "compression disabled" to active voice
- Tighten introductory sentence in configuration section
- Remove HKEY_LOCAL_MACHINE\SECURITY\Policy\PolAdtEv registry key entry
- Remove prerequisite paragraph about granting Read on SECURITY registry key

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Co-Authored-By: Claude claude-sonnet-4-6 <noreply@anthropic.com>
Co-Authored-By: Claude Code <ai@netwrix.com>
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Editorial Review

docs/auditor/10.8/configuration/logonactivity/permissions/permissions.md

  • Clarity — Line 23: "automatically adjust audit settings" is abstract — the reader doesn't yet know which audit settings are being referenced or what "adjust" means in the monitoring plan workflow. Suggested fix: "...and don't want Auditor to automatically adjust audit policy settings on monitored systems." (or similar wording that names the specific settings the option controls).

Summary

1 editorial suggestion across 1 file. Vale and Dale issues are auto-fixed separately.


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Comment @claude on this PR followed by your instructions to get help:

  • @claude fix all issues — fix all editorial issues
  • @claude help improve the flow of this document — get writing assistance
  • @claude explain the voice issues — understand why something was flagged

You can ask Claude anything about the review or about Netwrix writing standards.

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Auto-Fix Summary

0 issues fixed, 2 skipped across 1 files

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| docs/auditor/10.8/configuration/logonactivity/permissions/permissions.md:14 — Dale: passive-voice | 'is enabled/disabled' describes a feature's configuration state, not an action; active rewrite (e.g., 'If you enable...') changes meaning since the reader may not be the agent who enabled it |
| docs/auditor/10.8/configuration/logonactivity/permissions/permissions.md:15 — Dale: passive-voice | Same as line 14; 'configured with minimum rights' is an adjectival past-participle phrase modifying 'account' and reads naturally |

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