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Expand Up @@ -303,14 +303,15 @@ Here's a bit of money to get you started

*revise and rewrite*

That's what they told me, and gave me the ten thou. And a neat and very official looking printout of where this marvel could be found, since, to top all
That's what they told me, and gave me the ten thou. And a neat and very
official looking printout of where this marvel could be found, since, to top all
that, it didn't stay in a single place, but kept moving all over the
map. Along with a circus.
map. Along with the circus.

"A circus?" I asked. "What's its act? Bite chicken heads off?" I asked them.

"As far as we know, it could rip off the head of something considerably
bigger than a chicken." Talking-guy said, while Fists-means-business
bigger than a chicken." Talking-guy said, while Fists-that-mean-business
smiled in a nondescript way. "But yes, we are pretty sure it can do
that too."

Expand All @@ -319,14 +320,14 @@ shook hands and looked each other deep into our eyes. Can't remember
the color, they were rather nondescript. White around and darker stuff in the
middle, all I can remember. After that
I told them I would take it from there, and they were on
their way and I never ever saw them again, and I won't until I do the
their way. Never ever saw them since, and I won't until I do the
delivery in a few days. Now that I've got what they want I'll have to
look for them when I arrive at my destination. Or rather they will
look for them when I arrive at my destination. Or rather, they will
look for me.

Whatever, that's not going to be today. No, tonight I'm not gonna tell
you about my joining the circus either. Which, by the way, at that precise
moment I didn't really think it was going to be necessary.
moment I didn't really think was going to be necessary.

Duke of Poo tells his story
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