punchline copy changes for the about page#157
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Co-authored-by: ashleywallis <ashley.wallis@glitchsecure.com>
Co-authored-by: ashleywallis <ashley.wallis@glitchsecure.com>
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I'm going to go through and start making some changes so we don't end up in an endless feedback loop. There's some stuff I don't like, a lot I love, and some things I'm indifferent about. I'll try and separate my commits to make it obvious what changed. |
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Reflecting on it today, I am realising a laptop user needs to scroll 2 full screens full of text before they really even learn anything about us.
While I appreciate the fun that is had in these blurbs, they don't tell an unfamilar reader anything about the company. I'm going to try and salvage some of it, but I think a lot of the formatting and text does a good job of telling a story but not a good job of telling our story. I'm pushing up some more changes, @chembrad44 @ashleywallis let me know what you think... |

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