PA collection#386
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Range of fixes need to be made throughout (I've already made some of the changes myself, but I did not identify every instance if there was a pattern of common errors):
- Remember to include yourself for authorship purposes.
- Every line of a transcription needs to start with an
<lb>element with an@nattribute indicating the line number, even if it's a one-line inscription. - The capitalization and punctuation of different sections of the files need to be addressed. Remember that for most short metadata descriptions, the preference is no capitalization (except for proper nouns or adjectives derived from proper nouns) and no punctuation. For commentary and translation, follow standard rules of capitalization/punctuation.
- One could add further semantic markup to the transcriptions (e.g. marking up names and the like), though that would be an enhancement rather than a requisite.
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| <titleStmt> | ||
| <title>PA.Phil.UP.UM.A.B8903</title> | ||
| <author>Author</author> |
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Remember to include yourself on the author line when you are the initial author of a file.
| <!-- arc, grc, he, lat, und (unknown), zxx (non-linguistic content) --> | ||
| <msItem class="#funerary.other"> | ||
| <!-- short summary of the content of an inscription --> | ||
| <p>Relief with male servant and Palmyrene inscription.</p> |
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Do not capitalize beginnings of free text descriptions, and do not include periods at the end of single sentences as here.
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A number of small fixes still need to be made throughout; however, pretty much everything is in good shape here, and I'll merge these into the main. Remember to go back and address the various comments/small corrections.
| <origin> | ||
| <date evidence="#archaeology" notBefore="0301" notAfter="1101">300-1100 | ||
| CE</date> | ||
| <placeName ref="asia.near_east">Beth Shean, Israel</placeName> |
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Double-check the hierarchical ordering of the placename
| <listBibl> | ||
| <bibl> | ||
| <ptr type="rest-of-bibl" target="#Beazley_2"/> | ||
| <biblScope unit="page">p. 318</biblScope> |
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In theory you don't need the "p." since it's marked up accordingly
| <origin> | ||
| <date evidence="#archaeology" notBefore="0074" notAfter="0151">Late | ||
| first-early second century CE</date> | ||
| <placeName ref="europe.italy">Detailed place name</placeName> |
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Something for the place name to display, other than the default value? Even if it's just Italy, that's better than leaving the default
| </titleStmt> | ||
| <publicationStmt> | ||
| <authority>Brown University</authority> | ||
| <idno type="USEpigraphy" xml:id="PA.Phil.UP.UM.L.L-1033-11" |
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Something wonky with the display field of the idNo
| </titleStmt> | ||
| <publicationStmt> | ||
| <authority>Brown University</authority> | ||
| <idno type="USEpigraphy" xml:id="PA.Phil.UP.UM.L.L-1033-22">Repeat USEP ID</idno> |
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Missing idno display (make sure to go back and double-check these throughout...).
| <bibl> | ||
| <ptr type="rest-of-bibl" target="#CAT_3"/> | ||
| <biblScope unit="item">408</biblScope> | ||
| <biblScope unit="item">p. 408</biblScope> |
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Change the @unit if you're changing it in the text. (But also, you don't need to include p., no., etc. unless there are multiple different kinds of units being included.
| <bibl> | ||
| <ptr type="rest-of-bibl" target="#IG_II2"/> | ||
| <biblScope unit="item">11012</biblScope> | ||
| <biblScope unit="item">no. 11012</biblScope> |
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Delete the no. here -- that is already captured in the @unit. With it included, this would render as IG II2: no. 11012.
| <titleStmt> | ||
| <title>PA.Phil.UP.UM.L.80-2-15</title> | ||
| <author>Author</author> | ||
| <author>Davide Pironi</author> |
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@jbodel How should we handle authorship for this file?
| <body> | ||
| <div type="edition"> | ||
| <ab> | ||
| <lb n="1"/>Δίφιλος |
| </titleStmt> | ||
| <publicationStmt> | ||
| <authority>Brown University</authority> | ||
| <idno type="USEpigraphy" xml:id="PA.Phil.UP.UM.G.MS5463">Repeat USEP ID</idno> |
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