diff --git a/COPYING.TGPPL-v2-draft.rst b/COPYING.TGPPL-v2-draft.rst
index 9d4b639..5ff08c3 100644
--- a/COPYING.TGPPL-v2-draft.rst
+++ b/COPYING.TGPPL-v2-draft.rst
@@ -30,12 +30,14 @@ limited period of time.
 Grant of Additional Permission:
 
    When conveying a work based on the Program under sections 5 or 6 of
-   GPLv3, you have permission to delay compliance with the requirements
+   GPLv3, you may delay compliance with the requirements
    of those sections, including the requirement to license the entire
    work as a whole under GPLv3 and the requirement to convey
    Corresponding Source under GPLv3, for a period of up to 12 months
-   from the time of your conveying the work, provided that you grant this same
-   Exception to your downstream recipients when licensing your work
-   under GPLv3 following the period of delay.
+   from the time of your conveying the work.
+   
+   This additional permission is granted on the condition that you grant 
+   this same Exception to your downstream recipients when licensing 
+   your work under GPLv3 following the period of delay.