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                         <h5 style="margin-bottom: 0.5rem; color: white;">Gaming Depth</h5>
-                        <p style="font-size: 0.85rem; color: var(--text-secondary);">20 hours of Steam Deck OLED playback focus on Elden Ring and high-motion FPS titles.</p>
+                        <p style="font-size: 0.85rem; color: var(--text-secondary);">20 hours of Steam Deck OLED sessions focusing on Elden Ring and high-motion FPS titles.</p>
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                     <h3>Is it better than the Meta Quest 3?</h3>
-                    <p>For productivity and media consumption, yes. It's much lighter and clearer. For VR gaming (Beat
-                        Saber, etc.), the Quest is still superior.</p>
+                    <p>For productivity and media consumption, yes. The XREAL 1S is significantly lighter and offers superior optical clarity for text. For immersive VR gaming (like Beat Saber), the Quest 3 remains the better choice.</p>
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                     <h3>Can I use this as my main work monitor?</h3>
                     <p>Absolutely. Many remote workers use the Nebula software (available for Mac and Windows) to create three virtual screens. The text clarity on the 1S is sharp enough for coding and document editing.</p>
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                     <h3>Do I need to charge the glasses?</h3>
-                    <p>No. The XREAL 1S is powered by the device it's plugged into (phone, laptop, console) via the USB-C cable. It has no internal battery, which keeps it incredibly lightweight.</p>
+                    <p>No. The XREAL 1S is a "bus-powered" device, meaning it draws power directly from your phone, laptop, or console via the USB-C cable. This eliminates the need for an internal battery, keeping the frame incredibly lightweight for long sessions.</p>
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