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tweak the animated intro
Move the message about self-selected people from the end of Act 1 to the start of Act 2 and tweak the wording.
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For the rest of this walkthrough, we'll use a simplified example: <span class="hl">16 candidates</span>, from which we need to select <span class="hl">8 panellists</span>.
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The candidate pool is <strong>self-selected</strong>. The people who respond are not a random cross-section of the population &mdash; they're the people who <em>chose</em> to respond. This matters.
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<div class="act-title">Act 2</div>
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<h2>The Skewed Pool</h2>
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One key issue we have to address is that the candidate pool is <strong>self-selected</strong>.
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The people who respond are not a random cross-section of the population &mdash; they're the people who <em>chose</em> to respond. This matters.
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Here are our 16 candidates. Each has three demographic attributes: <span class="hl">Gender</span>, <span class="hl">Region</span>, and <span class="hl">Age</span>.
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