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Author: javascript-2020

html-components/html-components.html

@@ -432,7 +432,7 @@ <h3>
 
                     <div>
                           <p>
-                                a typical component / module lifecycle might be
+                                a typical component / module lifecycle might have
                           </p>
 
                           <ul>
@@ -441,7 +441,7 @@ <h3>
                                             initmod
                                       </b>
                                       <br>
-                                      This is where local depencies are / can be passed to the component
+                                      This is where local depencies can be passed to the component
                                       <br>
                                       They fundamentally should not be relying on global state to receive their local depencies, this method is not always
                                       needed
@@ -451,16 +451,16 @@ <h3>
                                             init
                                       </b>
                                       <br>
-                                      This is where the component first get executed, its an asynchronous function that allows the component to check
+                                      This is the first entry point to the component, it is an asynchronous function that allows the component to check
                                       that it has everything it needs to run, including access to the network to load resources it may need
                                 </li>
                                 <li>
                                       <b>
                                             initdom
                                       </b>
                                       <br>
-                                      This is where the component is able to set up its ui / dom, internally build the references it needs to run effeiciently,
-                                      it should be treated potentially as asynchronous
+                                      This is where the component is able to set up its ui / dom, internally build live references to run effeiciently,
+                                      it can be asynchronous.
                                 </li>
                           </ul>