Refine text for clarity and precision in index.html

Author: dkellam44

index.html

@@ -429,14 +429,14 @@ <h2>The Landscape Reality</h2>
                         <ul class="bullets small-bullets">
                             <li>Fragmented attention</li>
                             <li>Unpredictable funding cycles</li>
-                            <li>Old models no longer reliable</li>
+                            <li>Old box office models no longer reliable</li>
                         </ul>
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                         <div style="font-size: 20px; color: #2dd4bf; font-weight: 600; margin-bottom: 20px;">OPPORTUNITY</div>
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                             <li>Demand for embodied intelligence</li>
-                            <li>Nonverbal communication skills</li>
+                            <li>Nonverbal relating skills</li>
                             <li>Movement literacy for digital media</li>
                         </ul>
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@@ -449,7 +449,7 @@ <h2>The Landscape Reality</h2>
             <div class="slide-number">4 / 11</div>
             <h2>The Thesis</h2>
             <div class="quote">
-                Alithea has a unique expressive framework  — and the fastest way to unlock new opportunities is to build lightweight infrastructure that captures it
+                Alithea has a uniqely human expressive framework  — and the fastest way to unlock new opportunities is to build lightweight infrastructure that captures it
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             <p style="font-size: 24px; text-align: center; color: #999; margin-top: 40px;">Not bureaucracy. Infrastructure that creates optionality.</p>
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@@ -463,7 +463,7 @@ <h2>Three Rational Trajectories</h2>
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                         <div style="font-size: 48px; color: #2dd4bf; font-weight: 700; margin-bottom: 15px;">A</div>
-                        <div style="font-size: 20px;">Organization<br>of Record</div>
+                        <div style="font-size: 20px;">Become Organization<br>of Record</div>
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                         <div style="font-size: 48px; color: #2dd4bf; font-weight: 700; margin-bottom: 15px;">B</div>
@@ -485,7 +485,7 @@ <h2>Three Rational Trajectories</h2>
                     <div class="horizon-label">Horizon A</div>
                     <div class="horizon-title">Organization of Record</div>
                     <div class="horizon-desc" style="font-size: 22px; line-height: 1.6; margin-top: 30px;">
-                        Preservation: gathering artifacts, documentation, lineage<br><br>
+                        Preservation: gathering artifacts, documentation, mapping lineage<br><br>
                         Becoming a credible steward of ensemble movement theatre tradition<br><br>
                         <span class="accent">Authority</span> in a field that lacks a clear institutional home
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@@ -533,10 +533,10 @@ <h2>Guardrails</h2>
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-                        <strong>Not suggesting:</strong> "Call Disney tomorrow"
+                        <strong>Not suggesting:</strong> "Call Disney/Pixar tomorrow!!!"
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-                        <strong>Instead proposing:</strong> Build bridgeable assets
+                        <strong>Instead proposing:</strong> Invest in building bridgeable assets
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                     <p style="font-size: 22px; line-height: 1.6; color: #999;">
                         So if something bigger becomes relevant, you're ready and credible