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[rachelaux]

Screen 2

The copy at the top of the page makes it sound like adding contact info and registering are either/or actions. Alternate copy suggestion here

• replace screen 2 copy

Screen 23 and Screen 25
Feel like I'm being shouted at lol

• replace exclamation points for periods.

Screen 32
Copy at the top of the page was difficult to understand. Suggestion here

• replace screen 32 copy.

[RiverRuby]

Skipped for now